A Dream Birthday Surprise

Everybody loves surprises. Me? Of course! Well, there is a dream birthday surprise which I concocted the other night prior to bed after which no longer a surprise after publishing it online. Still, I hope one day a somebody would actually do something so sweet like this for me. Hehe!

Let's see, the story goes like this:

When the clock strike 12 am on 31st October, a cool, cute-looking dude walks excitedly to the girl's doorstep and ask for her. So when she comes to the door, all she can see is a HUGE BOUQUET of ROSES with two legs! Yup, you're laughing, all right! Roses... a huge bouquet of white / ivory roses with a single stalk of red rose in the midst of it. And there-you-go! So this cool, cute dude will pass it to the girl a card with a mysterious map on it, muttered happy birthday shyly and left.

The girl will be left standing at the doorway hugging the huge bouquet of roses, stunned & jaw-dropped. After regaining her posture, she gives it a thought and peeps at the card and decides to check it out the next evening.

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In the evening, the cool, cute guy is busy getting ready for the second surprise. With the help of his buddies, they lighted about 100 coloured candles around the basketball court nearby his place. And this guy is filled with anxiety and nervousness.

"What if she doesn't turn up??" was filling his brain space of thoughts... And the buddies give him some friendly punches and shoo him off the court pondering. As he is walking around, he sees the headlights of a tiny car and informs his buddies. They hide well, and the cool, cute-looking dude stands in the middle of the burning candles with a lovely cake waiting nervously for the girl.

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All the girl feels is surprise within a surprise. Looking at the cool, cute-looking but very extremely nervous dude, she feels so honoured, so loved, and so touched.

So what do you think? Good plot? Hehe! My colleagues said it sounded like a fairy tale. What say you, my dear readers? :P